tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4593182832464558023.post7563932266709812086..comments2023-12-28T04:18:00.684-06:00Comments on Adventures Fantastic: NaNoWriMo: Excerpt TwoAdventuresfantastichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16907562789681407416noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4593182832464558023.post-39256058759333857002011-11-20T19:37:56.151-06:002011-11-20T19:37:56.151-06:00Thanks. She's my favorite character at this p...Thanks. She's my favorite character at this point because she's only going to appear in flashbacks, and what happened to her and where she is will become a driving mystery.Adventuresfantastichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16907562789681407416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4593182832464558023.post-83882347934512582512011-11-20T18:39:34.511-06:002011-11-20T18:39:34.511-06:00Sorry it took a while to get to this. Way to pain...Sorry it took a while to get to this. Way to paint a character with an economical word count. Emotion and intrigue, a good hook.Paul R. McNameehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13498380385001618758noreply@blogger.com